Congratulation You Rock AB

Congratulations All Blacks you have made us proud and happy. It was so amazing that you celebrated a parade down there. We're so happy if our school was there we will celebrate with you together. All Blacks rocks and always forever. Your the man wish you good luck for everything. Thanks for making our team win.

All Blacks vs Australia

I wish the Australian and the All Blacks good luck. Don't give up, work as a team you have a team spirit in yourselves. Work together you can do it. We believe in you All Blacks and the Australian team. Never give up on yourselves. Team Spirit is in you don't forget that you have the strength inside your heart. Good luck.                        

Letter to Mr Hendricks

Walt: write a persuasive letter.

Purpose: To convince/persuade .

Success Criteria for opening paragraph

1. Title
2. I started with a question.   Should...

1. I stated my point of view clearly in the introduction.  I think…..
2. I backed my argument with evidence and detail.

Dear Mr Hendricks

Should we shorten our lunchtime break?

I think that you should shorten our lunchtime break so that we children can have more enjoyment with our friends or family. The reason why I help my family a lot so that I can get more time to play around with my cousins.  

Firstly, I would like to share my ideas with my family or friends and see what I learned in school with other students. I enjoy learning new words and new strategies in maths but mostly when the bell rings when it’s morning tea break.

Secondly at home I’m always bored because I don't have anyone to play with.. Playing by myself wasn’t easy than I thought since my sister stayed in the islands when we left last week Friday. When I left I thought about the lunch breaks, I said to myself “Maybe we should change the rules for the lunch breaks,” I spoke. .

Lastly, I got back to learn new things about the new strategies and the new words in each subject.

In conclusion, for the above reasons, I believe that you should shorten our lunchtime breaks or make it a little bit longer.

Yours sincerely

Megan

Thank Letter to Ms Parkes

Room 11

Glen Innes School

24th September 2015

Dear Ms Parkes

Thank you for helping room 11 students to improve their writing. We appreciate your help because you have made us improve. Learning new things from you is helping me with my writing.

My favourite thing in writing is recount or narrative. The reason  I like writing a narrative or a recount is because when I write I use my imagination about the characters in the story.

I’ve used different kinds of words in my recount writing. I need more practice with complex sentences.

I’m still struggling  with persuasive writing. I’ve tried practicing how to write a persuasive writing at home but I’m still stressed out when I write.

I appreciate your help Ms Parkes.

Your sincerely

Megan  

 

Role Model

WALT: write a topic sentence and related facts

My role model in my family are my parents and my brother. The reason why I chose them is because they work hard in the family. In my family my mum works at the bank she always concentrates on her business work. My dad he works at 3:00 in  the morning. He wakes up and get ready to go to work. My brother, he works hard and never gives up in training lessons. If he gets hurt he never calls out for help.

In school my role model will be Serena,Lana and Shanelle. The thing is I like to hang out with them because there academic. Serena she always comes and help me whenever I need her help. Lana she’s a great artist, she sometimes helps other people finishing of their visual arts. Shanelle she’s really helpful and smart. She sometimes helps me with my maths problems. I know I’m a little bit shy when I contribute in a class activity.

In the community my role model will be Lucy from the herbalife company. Lucy is a great helper she helps other people to get fit and healthy. Herbalife has changed people’s lives in the community and that’s why I chose Lucy as my role model.

For my Conclusion I would like to say I’m happy to be like my mother because she works really hard and she calms her mind down when she is nervous. I want to be just like her because she’s very smart like her father in Samoa.

African Rock Python

WALT: work with 2 others to write a narrative

One morning an African Rock Python taking its time going to the lake. While the Springbok was drinking water the African Rock Python was almost near of the edge of the lake. When the Python got to the edge of the lake the Python paused for a moment to get the Springbok access require. The African Rock Python opened his mouth wide open and chewed the Springbok. After the Python chewed all up the Springbok. The Python couldn’t eat until next year.     

The African Rock Python is one of the deadliest snakes in the world, they also have huge fangs that are deadly. The Python versed a Springbok. The Python went to a beachy lake and it moved smoothly to gets its prey. The Python waited til midnight for its prey to attack it. The Python can stay under water for 15mins and more. The Pythons have poisonous scales so it can kill such predators. The African Rock Python is not that easy to hunt down, because they are very dangerous species.

At the end of the movie the African Rock Python will swallow the reindeer with his large mouth. African Rock Python is dangerous than other creatures. This creature weighs 50k because it has a long body and tail. It’s tail has a pointed tail. It has a poisoned scale so don’t go close to him because he will open up it’s mouth and swallow you though his disgusting body.

The African Rock Python ate the Springbok with his large mouth. It has sharp teeth and pointy tail. It was the end of the Springbok’s life.

Jam biscuits

Walt: write a procedure for making………….

Success Criteria: use a verb to begin every  step in the method.

Today, in room 11 we made jam biscuits. Everyone got to make there own biscuit. Each person had to mix the ingredients. In the bowl it had all the ingredients in it. The ingredients that were in the bowl were:

• 125g butter (1/2 cup)
• 1/2 cup sugar
• 1 egg
• 2 cups flour
• 1 tsp baking powder
• 1 tbsp milk 180

Method:

1. Preheat the oven for 180℃
2. Add the butter into the bowl
3. Pour the butter into the bowl
4. Pour 1/2 cups of sugar on top of the sugar
5. Add the plain flour into the bowl with other ingredients
6. Mix the ingredients one by one until it’s smooth
7. Add 1 egg into the bowl then stir until it’s fine
8. Wash your hands before you put your hands into the ingredients
9. Stir the ingredients with your hands until it gets smoother and smoother
10. Roll up the dough until it’s round
11. Put the dough into the cups which is cupcake holders
12. When the dough is finished put it onto the tray then into the oven for 180℃
13. Wait for 10-15 mins
14. When it’s ready cool it down

Enjoy the Jam Biscuits