Room 11
Glen Innes School
24th September 2015
Dear Ms Parkes
Thank you for helping room 11 students to improve their writing. We appreciate your help because you have made us improve. Learning new things from you is helping me with my writing.
My favourite thing in writing is recount or narrative. The reason I like writing a narrative or a recount is because when I write I use my imagination about the characters in the story.
I’ve used different kinds of words in my recount writing. I need more practice with complex sentences.
I’m still struggling with persuasive writing. I’ve tried practicing how to write a persuasive writing at home but I’m still stressed out when I write.
I appreciate your help Ms Parkes.
Your sincerely
Megan 
1 comments:
Kia Ora Megan
I liked working with Ms Parkes because she helped me get my writing better. I hope she did the same to you. I think your writing is better because I enjoy reading your writing. What did you like when Ms Parkes helped us?
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