All Blacks vs Australia

I wish the Australian and the All Blacks good luck. Don't give up, work as a team you have a team spirit in yourselves. Work together you can do it. We believe in you All Blacks and the Australian team. Never give up on yourselves. Team Spirit is in you don't forget that you have the strength inside your heart. Good luck.                        

Basic Facts Results

WALT: writing a reflection on my basics facts results

In my basics facts test my score before was 572 and now my score is 588. I'm quite scared about my results when I first got it this morning. When I had my results I kept on starring at it and see what got wrong and what I got right in my test. I couldn't work carefully because it's hard for me to concentrate because of the noise that the kids are making. The next step that I want to learn is Algebra, Obtuse, Straight and Reflex. I really want to learn more about Statistics.

All Blacks vs France 2015

Well done for beating the French and I wish you good luck against South Africa.

Letter to Mr Hendricks

Walt: write a persuasive letter.

Purpose: To convince/persuade .

Success Criteria for opening paragraph

1. Title
2. I started with a question.   Should...

1. I stated my point of view clearly in the introduction.  I think…..
2. I backed my argument with evidence and detail.

Dear Mr Hendricks

Should we shorten our lunchtime break?

I think that you should shorten our lunchtime break so that we children can have more enjoyment with our friends or family. The reason why I help my family a lot so that I can get more time to play around with my cousins.  

Firstly, I would like to share my ideas with my family or friends and see what I learned in school with other students. I enjoy learning new words and new strategies in maths but mostly when the bell rings when it’s morning tea break.

Secondly at home I’m always bored because I don't have anyone to play with.. Playing by myself wasn’t easy than I thought since my sister stayed in the islands when we left last week Friday. When I left I thought about the lunch breaks, I said to myself “Maybe we should change the rules for the lunch breaks,” I spoke. .

Lastly, I got back to learn new things about the new strategies and the new words in each subject.

In conclusion, for the above reasons, I believe that you should shorten our lunchtime breaks or make it a little bit longer.

Yours sincerely

Megan