Walt: write a persuasive letter.
Purpose: To convince/persuade .
Success Criteria for opening paragraph
- Title
- I started with a question. Should...
- I stated my point of view clearly in the introduction. I think…..
- I backed my argument with evidence and detail.
Dear Mr Hendricks
Should we shorten our lunchtime break?
I think that you should shorten our lunchtime break so that we children can have more enjoyment with our friends or family. The reason why I help my family a lot so that I can get more time to play around with my cousins.
Firstly, I would like to share my ideas with my family or friends and see what I learned in school with other students. I enjoy learning new words and new strategies in maths but mostly when the bell rings when it’s morning tea break.
Secondly at home I’m always bored because I don't have anyone to play with.. Playing by myself wasn’t easy than I thought since my sister stayed in the islands when we left last week Friday. When I left I thought about the lunch breaks, I said to myself “Maybe we should change the rules for the lunch breaks,” I spoke. .
Lastly, I got back to learn new things about the new strategies and the new words in each subject.
In conclusion, for the above reasons, I believe that you should shorten our lunchtime breaks or make it a little bit longer.
Yours sincerely
Megan
1 comments:
Talofa Lava Megan,
I think our lunchtime should be shortened so we can spend more time with our families. But it is weird because I also think our lunchtime should not be shortened because then we can spend more time with friends and education.
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